The Great War had come to an end. The 6 surviving Alphas sent an order to move everyone and all valuables into the ancient chambers carved by Zios, the king of old. There the horrified animals hid until the evil phantom armies left to go back to their tower and left Jamaa. After they exited Graham the monkey Alpha made the chambers a gallery of ancient artifacts from Jamaa's past to honor it's greatest warriors.
Cosmo the koala herbalist brought healing herbs used by Mira, queen during the reign of Zios.
Peck the rabbit artist brought paintings of the old Jamaa and jars containing past secrets.
Graham brought carvings of Otto the elephant and Edmund the giraffe, both valiant warriors taken captive in the Great war.
Liza, the great panda explorer brought rare gems, said to be mined from the very place Zios formed our currency.
Deeper into the chambers more valuable treasures were were hidden. The gemstone spears given to the 5 wolf kings, Greely being the only survivor.
The stone statues of the surviving Alphas; Liza, Greely, Sir Gilbert, Graham, Peck, and Cosmo.
The armor of Captain Melvile, who's ship was disappeared after sinking phantom ship above Kani Cove.
A gold cast of Zios's mask and weapons he forged on his ancient forgotten table, and his own chest that can only be opened by the lost key.
A tapestry of the darkness of the phantoms taking over Mira's wonderful land.
Even the beautiful diamond Zios gave to Mira before he died.
And last, the chamber's most valued possession, Zios's great carpet that lay at the feet of his throne.
"And when the chamber was finished," said the old tiger, "all of Jamaa held a great feast and the chambers were open to every free animal." "Then why can't we go in?", one of the cubs asked abruptly. "In the chambers lay a trap door," he replied, "and it led to a deep and dark dungeon. There Greely kept the defeated phantoms from the Great War."
One misty night the surviving phantoms who left Jamaa supposedly forever after the Great War crept into the dungeon and set free the hundreds of imprisoned phantoms. Once again, Jamaa was not safe. The unprepared animals fought desperately for their land, but they were not like their ancestor warriors. Every land in Jamaa was conquered except for the four strongest, Jamaa Township, Serepia Forest, Crystal Sands, and The Lost Temple of Zios.
"Today the Jamaasian army is slowly taking back the conquered lands, but the chambers have never been entered again." One of the cubs shuddered. "But does that mean the phantoms could come back?" The elderly tiger sighed. "I don't know, I just don't know."
Good job! **gives thumbs up sign**
ReplyDeleteWowzers. This is amazing Gecko!!! You captured the history of Jamaa perfectly and pointed out objects I never even noticed or thought about! You should definitely write more! Maybe about the adventures of Captain Melville and how we came to be so famous and have a juice hut!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I am planing on writing more. This story along took about 2 hours, from taking all the screenshots to writing the story and then revising.
DeleteAnd by the way, I never got a reply on the last three headers I made for you. What did you want me to fix?
DeleteHaha nevermind. :P
DeleteDo you want me to make you a new header?
Deletei hate that you are calling them alpha they are shamans not alphas
ReplyDeleteTheir Alphas. AJHQ wants them to be Alphas. You can call them Shamans, but they aren't really shamans...
DeleteBut did you at least like the story? :L
Deleteyes i loved the story but no AJ doesn't really WANT them to be alphas you made them change it if you hadn't they would have stay shamans and im always going to be really mad at you for making aj change them
DeleteOh cool it bro... Jeez. It's a freaking name change. o.o
DeleteWhy do you like the name shaman better?
Delete@Anonymous
DeleteYeah, what Sheesh said. You should be happy the alphas came back at ALL. If you're angry, don't take it out on Geckoguy, it wasn't HIS fault. 8|
Fault?
DeleteI know I Do
ReplyDeletehey gecko!!! this is amazing! you are awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks lol
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